Written by Naresh Rana,

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Rishto me esi kaai jami ki aaj shbab madhosh hai
Dilo me esi padi darare ki mudto se juban khamosh hai

ek jaise ham ek fiza ek hi juban
Phir es dil me fark a gaya kahan

Posted by MONIKA SHARMA, on 27-09-2008 11:35, , Guest 1. TOUCHING DUA KARTE HAI HUM RAB SE  AAPKI KOSHISH SAFAL HO   JETE HAI HUM BHI ISI UMEED ME  DONO DESH KI DOSTI JALGI HO....   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by national, on 02-04-2008 22:28, , Registered 2. Very good koshish Keep writing and spread your goodwill message.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by ravindra, on 30-03-2007 20:43, , Guest 3. nice koshish great think u have.   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by Pawan, on 24-03-2007 04:14, , Guest 4. Allah/Bhagwaan/God Naa tera khudaa koi aur hai  Naa mera khudaa koi aur hai    All the people in the world must listen to this Written by Mr Babar R Chauhdri from Pakistan.    Love    Pawan   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by Rauf, on 23-03-2007 10:13, , Registered 5. ... Bahuth achi hai  mein yehein dua kartahu ki hamare beech dosthi ho   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by Rauf, on 23-03-2007 10:08, , Registered 6. koshish Hum dost banenge   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by TANIA AHMED, on 22-03-2007 23:44, , Guest 7. SUPERB bohat achi kohshish ki hy ap ny .Keep it up umeed karti hon hum sab k dilon mein jitni b aik dosry k liyah nafratein aur doriyan bohat jald kahtam ho jaien ji INSHAAALAH TALAH   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... » See all 1 replie(s) Posted by Abdul Ruaf, on 22-03-2007 17:22, , Guest 8. Koshish ---Nice one u r 100% right i hope ek din sub theek hoo gyee ga........   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by naresh, on 18-03-2007 20:01, , Guest 9. weldon weldon mere sher  weldon  likhta ja abhi to karbhan dur hai achi hai magar thoda sa aur koshish kar thodi se do char lines aur add kar        ek jaise ham e fja ek hi juban  Phir es dil me fark a gaya kahan    Milta hai sangeet, milte hai rashmo ribaaj   kya sarhde banne se bat jata hai jahan    Hoti ek jaisi sham, ek hi subhh  Phir kyu badal gaye dil ke arman    Chahte tho hai ham girana ye dhibar  magar lambe hai fasle -e- darmiyan    Dekh rahi hai rashta khamosh ye nigahe  shayad kahi juk aaye ye aashman   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment... Posted by rohit, on 18-03-2007 19:50, , Guest 10. wonderful yeh gazal to acchi hai miyan  par who kambakht bhi to sune to kya baat hai.yeh kambhakt who hain jo kano mein ruyin lagaye rakhte hai.keep it up   » Report this comment to administrator » Reply to this comment...