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Written by Naresh Rana   
Saturday, 17 March 2007

Rishto me esi kaai jami ki aaj shbab madhosh hai
Dilo me esi padi darare ki mudto se juban khamosh hai

ek jaise ham ek fiza ek hi juban
Phir es dil me fark a gaya kahan

Milta hai sangeet, milte hai rasmo rivaaz
kya sarhde banne se bat jata hai jahan

Hoti ek jaisi sham, ek hi subah
Phir kyu badal gaye dil ke arman

Chahte tho hai ham girana ye deewar
magar lambe hai fasle -e- darmiyan

Dekh rahi hai rasta khamosh ye nigahe
shayad kahi juk aaye ye aasman

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  Comments (9)
1. Very good koshish
Written by Hardas, on 03-04-2008 00:28
Keep writing and spread your goodwill message.
2. nice koshish
Written by ravindra, on 30-03-2007 22:43
great think u have.
3. Allah/Bhagwaan/God
Written by Pawan, on 24-03-2007 06:14
Naa tera khudaa koi aur hai 
Naa mera khudaa koi aur hai 
 
All the people in the world must listen to this Written by Mr Babar R Chauhdri from Pakistan. 
 
Love 
 
Pawan
4. Written by Rauf Mohammed, on 23-03-2007 12:13
Bahuth achi hai 
mein yehein dua kartahu ki hamare beech dosthi ho
5. koshish
Written by Rauf Mohammed, on 23-03-2007 12:08
Hum dost banenge
6. SUPERB
Written by TANIA AHMED, on 23-03-2007 01:44
:)bohat achi kohshish ki hy ap ny .Keep it up umeed karti hon hum sab k dilon mein jitni b aik dosry k liyah nafratein aur doriyan bohat jald kahtam ho jaien ji INSHAAALAH TALAH :)
7. Koshish ---Nice one
Written by Abdul Ruaf, on 22-03-2007 19:22
u r 100% right i hope ek din sub theek hoo gyee ga........
8. weldon
Written by naresh, on 18-03-2007 22:01
weldon mere sher 
weldon 
likhta ja abhi to karbhan dur hai achi hai magar thoda sa aur koshish kar thodi se do char lines aur add kar 
 
 
 
ek jaise ham e fja ek hi juban 
Phir es dil me fark a gaya kahan 
 
Milta hai sangeet, milte hai rashmo ribaaj  
kya sarhde banne se bat jata hai jahan 
 
Hoti ek jaisi sham, ek hi subhh 
Phir kyu badal gaye dil ke arman 
 
Chahte tho hai ham girana ye dhibar 
magar lambe hai fasle -e- darmiyan 
 
Dekh rahi hai rashta khamosh ye nigahe 
shayad kahi juk aaye ye aashman
9. wonderful
Written by rohit, on 18-03-2007 21:50
:) yeh gazal to acchi hai miyan 
par who kambakht bhi to sune to kya baat hai.yeh kambhakt who hain jo kano mein ruyin lagaye rakhte hai.keep it up
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